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It's just that I've been lurking around these parts for so long that I have seen times when it was quite a bit more livelier, and I'm talking like half a year ago or so.

As for chapters length again... Aren't chapters simpy a system for writers to divide their story into batches? That said, maybe you can recombine some of your chapters afterward? I'm saying that because I feel that some chapters are seperate where they are part of the same phase of the story.

Besides that, keep up the good work, it's nice to see a high concentration of updates. You forgot about my pairings question, though. Is it gonna be human pairings only or am I to expect some Eeveelution sex in the future? >D

Is this subcategory dead or is it me? Oh heck, more review space for me! X3

Now now, I was only pointing out that Angel -not- shagging the prof posed a noteworthy break with the trend of this type of story here on this site. What kind of pairings -will- we be seeing, though, if I may be so curious?

If time is a factor in your chapter length thing, remember you can always write the chapter in multiple sessions. ;) Keep up the good work and I'll be watching where this story goes.

I wonder if the fact that I was half-expecting Angel to do the professor says something about me or about the general trend of "young-trainer-needs-starter-Pokémon"-fictions on this site. =P

The writing in this story is pretty alright, though I think chapters could be longer. I'll be keeping an eye on this one to see where it goes.