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for Smoke And Chocolate

by beckychanmattkun

person Kaze
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. There's going to be more? I can't wait to see. God, I love the MxM pairing...and I definitely love spanking, so this is all sorts of awesome. xP
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ow, poor Matt's bottom. *grin*

I really enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. I think you've got a very engaging style and I did reach the end wanting to read more. :D
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You and me both Matilda!

I don't know how long we'll all have to wait. She has double shifts at college until after christmas.
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mello: You never seem to like anything I write. Not that I care.
But in regards to your 'another chapter' comment. It clearly states WIP. Work-In-Progress.
My girlfriend will be writing it, as we're co-writing this chapter for chapter.

Thanks anyway for the review.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok since my review was murdered here it is again. Good Job. It was great. I loved it. It made me laugh especially this part “No. I was remembering a soppy film I watched last night.” His words dripped sarcasm which Mello met with an angry glare. That was great. Mello can be so mean to poor Matt. I feel sorry for him yet at the same time I don't. lol It's hot how Mello treats him. And I loved the NinjaMatt name. Twas very cute.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY.
Thank you Haya.

-Hugs-
^^
I'm glad I shoved you on here now. xD

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