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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D Wow, that was fantastic. :DDDD
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY JIZZ I LURV IT!!!!! i especially love when ash & brock have that whole passionate moment towards the end>///< ♪♪♪♪
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was soooo amazing! You had me in tears at some points, and just wow!!!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...GOD. That was truly the best fanfiction I've ever read. I almost didn't want it to stop, and in all honesty, I almost orgasmed in several parts that were so hot. You're an incredible writer, especially with these sort of things. I could feel my heart racing as fast as Ash's during the scene with the psycho. You're truly an amazing writer. I thank you for exposing my eyes to something this beautiful. You make everything seem so realistic.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
T~T...beautiful
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January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was pretty danged awesome! the perfect kind of lengthy one-shot. the gory sex part was totally cringe-worthy but what good horror DOESN'T have a moment where you want to close your eyes and look away?
and you didn't misty-bash! <3 and everyone was kind of in character! the cup runneth over! keep writing gems like this. :3
and you didn't misty-bash! <3 and everyone was kind of in character! the cup runneth over! keep writing gems like this. :3
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am not lying. That is easily the best Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. I'm also really glad it wasn't short! Kudos to you my friend!
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was a very detailed story, which is the kind that I like. Keep up the good work, there aren't many people writing pokemon yaoi erotica anymore!
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review!
Since you asked a question I just wanted to drop a response in here right quick. So, no Billy wasn't the kid who Ash was with earlier on in the story as he was going in the opposite direction they were. I'm into subtleties, so Billy Klore was mentioned on the news while Brock was flipping through the channels on the TV trying to drown out Ash next door as the fifth trainer to have recently gone missing. So that was intended to signify that Ash was going to be this guy's sixth victim. I'm bad like that giving just a slight little foreshadow that things are about go horribly bad.
Thanks for leaving a comment and enjoying the story!
Since you asked a question I just wanted to drop a response in here right quick. So, no Billy wasn't the kid who Ash was with earlier on in the story as he was going in the opposite direction they were. I'm into subtleties, so Billy Klore was mentioned on the news while Brock was flipping through the channels on the TV trying to drown out Ash next door as the fifth trainer to have recently gone missing. So that was intended to signify that Ash was going to be this guy's sixth victim. I'm bad like that giving just a slight little foreshadow that things are about go horribly bad.
Thanks for leaving a comment and enjoying the story!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that is the longest one shot i haev ever read i loved it tho