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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. I mean, most stories out there revolve around the same theme of Yuuri breaking off the engagement and Wolfram just becomes angsty & broken hearted. But your story has a greater impact with Wolfram's life on the line. And your style of writing is very smooth and credible all the way.
Hope to see more updates from you.
Yay Yuuram. XD
Hope to see more updates from you.
Yay Yuuram. XD
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I apologize profusely!
I wrote the wrong reveiw for the wrong story!
I'm really sorry, feel free to cancel of my review.
I clicked your story open to read for the first time while waiting for the other story to load. I must have gotten confused.
Sorry again. I'm off to read your story now X)
I wrote the wrong reveiw for the wrong story!
I'm really sorry, feel free to cancel of my review.
I clicked your story open to read for the first time while waiting for the other story to load. I must have gotten confused.
Sorry again. I'm off to read your story now X)
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about the story...thus far
First, I like the setup and the tone of the story, with Yuuri matured now, it almost
feels a bit ''tense & dangerous'' seeing Yuuri becoming THE Maou finally.
It'll be interesting to see how he handles it.
Second, do you realize [I'm sure you do if folks mentioned it] that chap. 2 is
posted twice?
First, I like the setup and the tone of the story, with Yuuri matured now, it almost
feels a bit ''tense & dangerous'' seeing Yuuri becoming THE Maou finally.
It'll be interesting to see how he handles it.
Second, do you realize [I'm sure you do if folks mentioned it] that chap. 2 is
posted twice?
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!! Hope to see a lemon soon!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
we read all that in the frist chapter were is the next?
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the sweetness and the fact that you keep their fighting and Wolfram's emotional heat intact. Nice chracterisation XD Please keep writing!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to pay more attention to what you are posting. This second chapter was already posted with the first chapter. Now anyone (like me) who was looking forwards to an update is terribly dissapointed. Please be more careful next time and post a real chapter.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story!!!!!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What i wouls give to be afly onthe wall. Damn that is sexy!