rate_review Reviews

Well written you didn't hold back on the sex scenes im a sucker for intense smut stories lol guilty pleasure. Had a load of fun reading this. It was well executed. Please do write a shirogane and akira awakened as ryuko PWP with just as much passion. I would be ecstatic to read that pairing. Again one of the most well executed stories i have ever seen on this website;)

This is an EXCELLENT PWP!! It's really a shame that you haven't had more reviews - though that's typical for this site, I'm afraid. I just discovered Monochrome Factor and this wonderful pairing, and I'm SO HAPPY to find such a well-written sexy fic with them. I absolutely love switching, too, and I think it totally makes sense with the two of them. Of course Shirogane's always more in control, even when he's on the bottom. XD

I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I would love it if you wrote more ShiroAki someday!

Lol I liked it :)
the sex scenes were very well written
and the end was super cute X3