rate_review Reviews

Great description of Domecki's progress from top to bottom. Cigarette time.

NICE!!! SO INTENSE!!!! LOVE IT!!!

I like the last line.It was really hilarious.Great job!

sooooo good ^^ I like the Doumeki that only acts by instinct, without ever think about his feelings for that 'annoying' (as he always mention) kid... it felt soooo real, and so in-character, as so few can make. I really think that if someone show Watanuki at least a little tiny bit of care, he'll come apart and let himself be seduced pretty easily, after all, someone without a past, without family and with so many hardships in his life, will always (at least in my mind) seek for any form of love that he'll come across, and what could it be bigger than a Doumeki always sacrificing something for him??!!

That was pretty cool. Thank you for writing it!!, and thank you for letting Kimihiro confused about if sleeping in the same futon was normal (that was sooooo cute for me!!, "I don't want to feel like a stupid if it's really normal, so let's act as if it's no big deal" ^__^ aaaah!, Watanuki-kun is simply the best and the cutest and the most paranoid character I've ever seen... and I believe the first character that always yell, and scream about nothing, and fussing and everything else, that I've ever think that it is CUTE, I mean, he's kind of crazy, but ooohh so sweet. Those CLAMP girls always know how to make you love their characters ¬¬... except X's Kotori >.<)

..... O K ¬¬U Sorry for that rambling, I've already finished. Please continue writing and congrats!! ^.^

I really liked this. You should add more to it. I'm sure someone like you could take the plot of this wonderful story anywhere you wanted.