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for Charming Lies

by gloom

schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing in general (strong word choice, visuals, characterization through subtle body language and actions as well as speech...I can't even think of everything) but I also love your writing of this pairing in particular. The beginning and ending were both exceptional, the sex was really great with the whole power~play and not-over-the-top allusions to discipline and biting, and the dynamic you wrote was completely believable.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing online!

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