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for Shadows of the Night

by Stormborn Apostle

schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't beleive I haven't read this yet, it's nice to get some backstory and see a same Miyako.
person soundwave
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey greate work on this fic but my question is will gardevoir ask the greate one about the past and also if there baby die or what because if the baby had die than she shoud not be there give some hit
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cerebrate Fate---It was barely out in time, lol, but haha, I did it. Very late happy birthday, too, lol.

Skyler---I considered Flannery/Blaziken, but they haven't really been examined in Sinners proper, so their personalities weren't really set yet. Miyako and Quiero, however, have received a pretty deep examination (and will continue to show up later in the main story).

FireBlaster---It's interesting writing them as 'normal', considering that the main encounter with Quiero was as a storyteller and Miyako as a batshit insane ghost. They were both very much sane and in love during life, though, so tee-hee.

Espy---NEVER SKIP ANYTHING. Hope you haven't been doing that in Sinners, or you're going to be very surprised when certain events transpire, lol. And yes, I will refuse to write lemon scenes if I feel it damages the story's overall tone. I like sex, especially when it involves Gardevoir, but I've always been a plot-first, sex-later kind of writer, heh.

Xain---Perhaps you should review it after you read it, and not before, lol.

Kurbee---There will be Flannery goodness in a future oneshot, I promise you.

Ashi Taiyono---Glad you like it.

shadowed death657---While the focus at this part of Sinners is how similar the two timelines are, later the focus will be how different they've ended up. Partly because of that silly "free will" thing, and partly because the veil of the Shadow is breaking things down, including prophesy.

Imasuky Lomae---Heh, it ain't going nowhere. Glad you enjoyed.

Vyers---I thought it was short, too, but I wasn't going for anything epic or seriously plot-filled. Just a brief snapshot of two very long lives. :-D
person Bishonen
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic soory i took so long lost my computer but this was so good it almost made me cry.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person Ashi Taiyono
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was...touching. Thank you.
person shadowed death657
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great, i really liked it lol in this case history repeats itself alot dosent it
person Kurbee
schedule December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I doubt you're the only one, Celebrate. I had at least 5 friends at my old high school that played at least one of the games from Ru/Sa/Em/LG/FR, and now in college I've found 2 more who play Diamond.

And I'm turning 19 next month.

Great read, Slash. Though I too figured it would be a friendly romp story featuring the lovely Flannery, I'm not too disappointed. Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to the lot of you!
person xain34
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this looks good Slash, I'm gonna get reading it A.S.A.P. Peace for now man, and I hope to see some more from you later. ^_^
person Cerebrate Fate
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Slash actually got something out on time! Ill post a review after I read it.
person Cerebate_Fate
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay backstory! Merry christmas everyone. I am now (As of yesterday) OFFICIALLY 18. Woot. Who wants to bet that I'm the only 18 year old at my school that is still into pokemon?

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