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I really would like a continuation of that fic.

Saber trying to get close to Shirou that would be really interesting.

I'd Wish There Was A Sequel To This With Saber Getting Some Too...

 

GOOD LUCK!

Dude, this is a great idea! You should totally continue this! I'd love to see Saber and Rider compete for Shiro's attention, and maybe you could even find a way for Shiro to end up with both (its fan fiction so why not:p) Plus this could have a whole bunch of effects on the story. I also think you were a bit hard on yourself about the lemon too. While it wasn't great, the biggest problem was it was too short. Just take your time and try to lengthen them and I bet your lemons will be great. Maybe add in some extra stuff to keep them from being repetitive, like cosplay, bondage, anal, etc. And, hey, I bet you could work in some threesomes! So please, please, pleeeease continue; I'll be bookmarking this in hope.

I'd like you to do a rewrite someday. Still, this story's pretty good, and it's another Shiro/Rider one at that. I wonder if anyone could make either a Shinji/Rider fic or a Sakura/Rider fic, or perhaps a Shinji/Rider/Sakura threesome (whoa!).

This was well done, even for a first attempt. Shiro/Rider's my main pairing in the FSN universe.