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by SerpentsChild

schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this story has more impact when listening to 'Goodnight Julia' in the background. I read it again like that, and definitely gathered more from it the second time. I liked the way this was written, the way it built up to the reveal of who the narrator was. It did get a small bit confusing as to what was going on at the very end, but at the same time it gave just enough detail to gather clues. Maybe that was how you intended it? Hmm. It actually crosses me as a bit true to the style of the anime itself, not answering all questions but laying things out there for the reader to figure things out. Either way, I liked it.

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