rate_review Reviews

Excellent work! Although there was one spelling mistake that just had me laugh out loud... No offence meant! But: "because if he didn’t stop Lui now this would be over fart too soon."

I'm sorry... ^_^ endless fun with spelling mistakes...

But the story in itself is very good, steaming hot as I like them. Beautiful language. Thanks for this! :)

This was very sweet and touching. Naoji, in his own gentle way, is a strong person, too. I liked the interplay of their two controlled natures, coming to a mutual equality in bliss. Very well written.