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Very sweet, and definitely better than the actual ending, lol. I felt the very same way with the series! It just wasn't right, not even a kiss at the end?? Just a hug? Talk about hitting you in the gut, lol. Newayz, great job, wonderful writing.

Don't get me started on the fricking bullshit hug. It was the same with Inuyasha, YEARS of story, they're married and NO FRIGGING KISS!?! Nice to see someone giving Van and Hitomi the time together they deserve.

I know what you mean by JUST A HUG...
I still cruse the end of the anime (and the movie).
Not even a kiss.
I mean, they said they loved each other. Why didn’t she stay with him?
I didn’t get it – not even now…

But YOU did a great job^^
I wanna thank you for sharing such a lovely one-shot. Even if it still is a little bit sad that both of them just had one time to make love.

Hug you
Jacks-peapod

PS: Sorry for my bad English, but it’s not my first language^^

I know exactly what you mean. I mean they were supposed to be soul mates and they didn't even kiss! Gawds they did the same crap on Inuyasha and I think its bull.

I'm happy that Van and Hitomi can have the kind of ending I wanted them to have in your fan fiction.