rate_review Reviews

This story is so entertaining. Being in Scotland is bringing out different sides of our boys. Very well written, you capture the essence of the Schwartz boys perfectly. I love the way you write.

I laughed out loud at the green thong :D. Angus is a hoot too.

*feeds the bunny some haggis*

Oh god! Schu meeting his family! Brad is not going to know who to shoot first - Schu or himself. Too funny, hon. Can't wait to see more!

Crawford has a Grandfather? How ... normal! I feel sorry for Nagi. I hope something good happens for him while they are in Scotland. And Farf kissing? I think the Wee Folk are about and up to no good. Schu, really, they should just stuff him in the trunk for real. Excellent chapter!

*snickers*

*rereads*

*howls with laughter*

Poor Brad.... crazy relatives, crazy allies... he's gonna have to kill them all to get any peace isn't he?

I just can't guess where you're going with this. And that is an entirely, insidiously good thing. All I keep thinking is that curiosity killed the cat... Schuldig is somehow going to get a whole lot more than he bargained for. And, maybe for the first time ever, Schuldig is in a setting where he does NOT stand out in any way shape or form. Just another ginger, actin' looney. Nothing all too strange about that in Scotland, clashing clothes and all. Your skill in leading into the story has gotten so much better over the years. The first chapter was a nearly instant hook. You're offering just enough to make us ask the questions that can only be found by continued reading. Kudos.

Ah, too funny for words, dear. Poor Brad. Schu is going to be impossible to live with after this. I can't wait to see more.

*howls with laughter*

You knew that Schu was going to be one with a blue silk ribbon tied into a bow.....

*snerks*

And it's going to be an *interesting* thing to see their reaction to the Crawford Clan. As well as the clan's reaction to them.

Arghhh! It starts already before they even get a nap or shower at the hotel. Crawford will be lucky to get anything accomplished with this crew along. Tell me again why he needs them? Right. That's what I thought. Only your excellent writing is going to be able to save him!

*ROFL*

I'm dying at the last line. I love this bunny Phoenix. Keep feeding it!