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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor Ritsuka.
I liked the story, you expressed Ritsuka's feelings very well. The thing I have to point out isn't a critic or something of the like, more like an opinion (as if the whole review isn't an opinion): I personally find fascinating that Seimei is as evil as he is and he still keeps his ears, unlike Ritsu for example. it's very hard to find a fic with Seimei where he doesn't lose his ears though I have indeed read one already, and I personally prefer to see how writers can explore his sadistic side without going to rape, but like I said, this is just and opinion, and I liked your story
I liked the story, you expressed Ritsuka's feelings very well. The thing I have to point out isn't a critic or something of the like, more like an opinion (as if the whole review isn't an opinion): I personally find fascinating that Seimei is as evil as he is and he still keeps his ears, unlike Ritsu for example. it's very hard to find a fic with Seimei where he doesn't lose his ears though I have indeed read one already, and I personally prefer to see how writers can explore his sadistic side without going to rape, but like I said, this is just and opinion, and I liked your story
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was great! Great N/C, so frikking sad though. Damn. Poor Ritsuka! And Soubi! Oh but Seimei...mmm. I wish there were more Seimei fics...
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Greetings!
I liked your story.
It has made upon me strong impression.
I the old fan loveless.
I ask of your sanction to translate your story on Russian.
I shall write that the author of this story you.
I promise that I shall send all to the review of your story.
I liked your story.
It has made upon me strong impression.
I the old fan loveless.
I ask of your sanction to translate your story on Russian.
I shall write that the author of this story you.
I promise that I shall send all to the review of your story.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was.. gah! You wrote that so splendidly. I was in tears by the end of the story, waiting for Soubi to save Ritsuka.. But he never came T__T This one-shot was remarkable, though I'm usually not a fan of sad endings :) Very well done! 10/10