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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's really good! The story has a plot! if you can set up Eiji and ryoma or Fuji with ryoma that would be awesome! Good luck!
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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes please do continue this it seems like it is going to be an amasing piece and I can't wait to see where you take it <3
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please please update soon. this sounds like a really good story.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, and unlike another reviewer had no problem with you sentence length, and structure. I think it flowed really well, and that the quality of your writing was excellent. I really hope that you do decide to continue this, it would be nice to read something where partners are a little more fluid, and that not everyone ends up with the same person they seem to in every other story. Thanks for sharing, I appreciate it.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is turining out interesting and I would love to continue reading it ^_^
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see this contuined! ^^ I thought it was good so far! And can the pairing be MomoRyoma? (Yeah I know original but I like this pair, plz!)
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello! Interesting plot line. But your sentences are way too long. They are difficult to read. Also, try showing the friendly banter between the guys. I'd rather read what is happening than your summary of the conversation. it sounds more like a book report or synopsis of a show than story telling. Good luck.