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for Innocent Rain

by saxonjesus

schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg, i dont remember this chapter but its freaking awsome!!! i love it. please read/review my stories please. ty ty¢¾. this is the second time i've read it al the way through too. lol. you guys are amazing!
person Tory
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really hope u'll write more.
person Tory
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i absolutely love u now. that sory was amazing. i wish there was more though. i've read it all. i want to know what happens to everyone after their innocence is gone and theres no more threat from the earl. how is lavi and kanda? what happens with miranda and uhh the other dude? how about allen and lenalee? and what does amanda do after her break up with darcy? y did they break up? what happens with cyrean (i cant remember her name) her baby? and the Sasa chan? its like its only starting.
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story for quite sometime and I admit that your story forced me to create an account on here :P I particularly enjoyed your latest chapter (27) Miranda is my all time favorite character and my OTP is MirandaxMarie and you made me so very happy, and sad at the same time, with her story. My only/fav yaoi pairing is Kanda and Lavi so you guys have definitely made this annoying hiatus on the manga much more tolerable <3 I would love to actually be able to talk to one of you through IM or e-mail at some point :D Maybe I could help you guys somewhat? Anyway keep up the amazing work! :D
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go to your author panel, click 'Edit profile', then uncheck the annon reviews thing.

Also, the missing chapter thing for me curious, as I didn't notice a flow issue while reading... but I can't find the story on fanfiction.net. O_o
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok Thanks. We think everything is all set regarding the reviews and we fixed the chapter on ffnet. The link to our ffnet story = http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4856229/1/Innocent_Rain
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, you've probably alienated most potential reviewers by having your story set to members only on reviewing. I signed up JUST to review this. LOL

I have to say, out of most of the stories I've EVER read, yours has some of the most believable character development... if not THE best. In the D.Gray-Man fandom, I've NEVER seen anything as great as this. I was almost literally blown away most of the time. I'm seriously glad that I did not drop this at the first sign of original characters, like I normally would.

Kanda Yuu's backstory was amazing [but completely horrible. I cried], and it works so well. Lavi's issues are also totally believable... If I hadn't been totally in love with the Kanda/Lavi pairing before reading this... I would have been turned. Seriously.

I'm also looking forward to seeing more development between Allen and Linali. XD

Over all, I can't wait to see more of this, and I honestly think it would be worth a reread once it's done. XD
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.... thanks Ayame... does anyone know how to fix this? We just spent the last half hour failing at trying to figure this out. Not to mention its bugging out and didn't post chapter 7 somehow. It may be our problem seeing as the same thing happened on ff.net as well. Now we have to fix that too.
schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is that...it? please tell me that's not the end of it!!!!!

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