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Is this story going to be updated? I really like it and want to see more.

Yet another well done story! I'm interested in seeing how Raito handles all of them, as well as this ecentric professor. Not to mention L, who I assume is at least one of the mysterious voices (The dream gave me the idea that there may be two voices?).

please update this story, i really want to read it when they get to the house, and i want to see how L makes his appearance. is L the person that is calling out to light?

O.k., good base idea but it needs a major edit. Really, I mean it.
Common errors: THAN is a comparative, THEN is an expression of consequential time, MORE/LESS THAN, this happened THEN that.
TOO much, TO do something, he did this TOO, he did this in order TO.

Also the random vulgarity and unrefined and incorrect expressions/sentence structures are rather ooc. Raito is a genius, and a particularly proud one at that.

Basically the base idea is very interesting, but the current writing style is too abrupt, vulgar and full of inaccuracies to be readily readable.

I just started reading this and (squeals) I'm already hooked! I can't wait until all the characters come together (especially L and B!!!). I've watched the movie for Rose Red (if it's the same one your referring to) and I see where your get your inspiration from. Creative authors are awesome!

Keep typing!
~Chu

Aww don't worry poor Wolfy, here's a big, juicy bone! I really like this story and I'm excited to see where it goes. I don't like horror movies (blame my brother), but I love horror stories and I love Death Note, so it's a perfect combination! I can't wait for L to show up, but can we get rid Misa and Takada, please? No? Ok, I'll live so long as there's some hott guy-on-guy action ;)

I won't let it die! I love this story so far, please update once again!

A very intersting story, I must say.

I know what you mean about inspiration drying up and the need to write another one. I was actually thinking of writing another DN fanfic to get the juices flowing again since how I kept on having those ideas that wouldn't had fit in with my current DN fanfiction.

I stopped by to see if you updated "Darkness Within your Light" and found this story. I must say that I really like it so far! So please update again soon, for both of the Death Note stories! Love to Wolfy!!!