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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well done
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting PWP.
I wanted to leave a review because even though the story was short and didn't focus around any particular story I could tell you're a talented writer. No grammar mistakes of which to speak of, and fairly vivid descriptions. It was interesting how Ash was stripping before his presence was even known; good detail on a scene that could have been right out of a porno.
I think you should write more stories, maybe try your hand at a full out story. Not that there's anything wrong with pure smut, but trust me... there are people out there writing stories who put no where near the effort you displayed here; and it's always a shame to see talent for good things wasted.
In any case, have fun with what you do. Later!
I wanted to leave a review because even though the story was short and didn't focus around any particular story I could tell you're a talented writer. No grammar mistakes of which to speak of, and fairly vivid descriptions. It was interesting how Ash was stripping before his presence was even known; good detail on a scene that could have been right out of a porno.
I think you should write more stories, maybe try your hand at a full out story. Not that there's anything wrong with pure smut, but trust me... there are people out there writing stories who put no where near the effort you displayed here; and it's always a shame to see talent for good things wasted.
In any case, have fun with what you do. Later!