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Well, things sure have changed since the last time!

Last time I reviewed (eh... not counting that little note) Raito had just returned from death. You know, I thought for a while that the Death Note piece in him plus the syringe injections had made Light a semi-zombie. Clearly, that didn't happen. Too bad. I had already decided how he would look, (with wings and all :D)when you updated and squashed my hope! Damn you!!11!!!1!!!!

Just kidding... >_>

Light seems to get more and more talented at getting new people, sympathetic to his cause or at least willing to help him. His acting abilities never fail to amaze me. L or somebody should hack into the Oscar Academy Awards program and hand Light an award. And of course Raito is also getting better at infuriating Matt, can't forget that tiny fact. The evil part in me can't help but rejoice in that. Btw, thanks for L's further explaining his and Light's relationship. Mello's and Raito's meanwhile relationship is getting more and more complicated, obviously a fact that is also killing Matt a little inside (lol).

I don‘t know what to think of that Raito was supposedly adopted and should have gone to the Whammy‘s house. For now I‘m just going to wait and see. From what I‘ve seen of the story so far I guess it is going to be important to the plot and in particular B. Since I‘m talking about B, I‘d like to mention that that thing with B and Misa was very well written. Not only did she manage slip into the mansion without detection but also scare L. Her changed manners, sudden intellectual increase and little things like how she breaths makes one truly wonder if she is or isn‘t possessed by B. These facts plus the title of the sequel make me think that it is the former. Aside from Kira himself and maybe L, B is the most interesting character in DN-world.

Another thing that I would like to congratulate you guys on is how Raito handled SPK. Haha... it is wrong to say so, but to me it was the highlight of the last few chapters. Raito and Misa/B have teamed up together and are on loose again, with L and co. close behind. It was refreshing to find that Kira was back into the game. His plotting ways are always the most interesting part of the story. Ok, I lied again. The chapter where Kira escapes was actually my favorite (or did the SPK massacre happen in the same chapter?). It is awesome that Kira and B have banded together. The world two greatest killers.

Near is still somewhere out there but seems like that he will have to lay low awhile. Considering his character he is sure to strike back with vengeance, sooner or later. Bella is now confirmed as the one behind Kira's recent heart attack and is apparently not as much an idealist as she appeared to be in the beginning. Lol, hopefully Raito decided to take a few more lessons from B before taking down Bella.

Well can‘t wait to see how things are going to turn out.

You two are killing me. You might as well have written my name down.

Just a little over a week and wow...

You've outdone yourself. I haven't read the chapters thoroughly so I'll post an acutal review later, but I have to say that the last one was my favorite of them all. :D

Btw, I decided to nominate this story [url=http://thereadershavechosen.eternflame.com/forum/index.php?topic=814.0]on RHC[/url].

I love this story so much i cant even express what I feel while reading...its so intense; i felt like crying so many times and felt like euphoric so many other times.
Everything is great inside this story, the gramamr, the style, the plot...
Cant wait for more chapters! I cant stop reading this story and re-read some chapters which are so much special..
Congratulations guys for this giant and great work!

You make me cry when I see that there isn't another magical button at the bottom that leads to another chapter.

Chapter 36 has broken my heart. I'm crying.

Nice cliffhanger, by the way. -_-

I am addicted. More. Now...Please.

Wohoo, three new chapters! Awesome, you guys are spoiling us. Ok, here is the highlights of my thoughts while reading the last three chapters.

So it was Matt after all.

Somebody is jealous.

How can L be so indifferent to Raito's affair?

Raito is as awesome as always. Cool.

Hah! Linda, your'e finished. Once Kira is interested in you...

You know, this scene (Linda is going to kiss Raito) is awfully familiar. Well, one more strike for Kira.

Damn it... Matt.

WHAT, did Matt sell Raito out? I so, my opinion of him goes steadily further down.

YAY, Kira got the eyes! Hah, I dare certain person to punch him again. (and aww... Mello saved Raito)

Raito is DEAD!

L KILLED him! Backstabbing scumbag!

God damn it, Matt is such a bastard... grr... how can Mello tolerate him?

The doctor is evil. This is a funeral after all.

No, wait. Kira is not dead!

Long version:

These chapters where great! I kind of thought that it was Matt who looked into the room while Mello and Raito were *cough* busy but I wasn't sure then. Linda's opinion of Raito must be terrible since she sees how his actions are affecting one of her closest person and she seems -indeed- rather angry.

Kind of strange how indifferent L is to Raito's affair. Yeah, sure it is understandable that L want's to clear his head a bit, something that he cannot do with Raito constantly around him. But is he so confident in their relationship that he is willing, well... dump him on Mello, doing who knows what (actually we know XD)? Wasn't he just few days ago so depressed because of their affair? Why the sudden turn about? Though, I will give you that this is L so who knows how his mind works.

Raito's response to Linda very rational and convincing. In fact, it made - in my eyes - Mello and Raito's relationship much deeper than it was before. Raito's speech about justice was the same as what he told Mello. For a while I thought that Linda was really going to kiss him like Mello did. At that moment I thought that Kira gained one more point but at the same time, it was kind of disappointing how predicting and repetitive that was. Imanige my surprise when Matt suddenly appeared. Totally didn't see that coming and this also made me so curious what Raito next action was going to be. The new plot twist also made the chapter another "win".

What Raito realized at the end of his and Matt's conversation (conversation sounds way too polite), that somebody within must have had betrayed him to SPK, was major. That that somebody was most likely Matt, I was struck speechless. I mean... what kind of bastard does that! There was a remote possibility that this was all just Raito's speculate, but L refused to show Raito his information! The way how he worded his answer meant that L had something to hide, that also meant that Raito's theory was way more probable than before. Shit. Matt is a bastard! Q.e.d. That was my conclusion.

Then Raito gained the eyes. That was terrific! But... but... he had to die because of that! That doctor was such an near sighted scoundrel. In Raito's funeral, all he could mourn was L approaching death. Yeah, that was sad... but this was Raito's funeral! The doctor became my nr. 2 most disliked character, right after Matt in the story.

But... Raito is not dead! Huh... YAY!

Thank you for the quick uploading.

o.m.g... This has got to be the single greatest story I have read here. I have spent the last 3 days practically glued to my screen. Honestly, if this was on sale I would buy it in a second, for no other reason than so that I could read it over again. Reading this, it doesn't feel like a fan fiction, but a rather true continuation of the story. Everything is just so probable.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

This review should be prefaced with the fact I am not a fan of Mello. However, this is one of the most logically and well thought fanfictions I have ever read ( and I have read a lot). I read all 34 chapters in one sitting. Yes, I am a complete insomniac.