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AFF is slow on reviews...FF.net is just as bad but don't let it get you down. Get on going! It's a good start, I like the cute idea of L hoarding food like that. will you explain that behavior later?

I want you to know that I don't usually bother to review on here, so feel very lucky. But I recognized a bit of myself in you, the way you mentioned losing faith in your writing (I don't have any work on aff, it's all on ffnet).
You're doing a good job, so keep it up. You might want to read over for grammar and spelling errors, though. I saw a couple, the most glaring of them that you accidentally put "dada" instead of "data." It IS spelled with a T.
Other than that it's going pretty well, and I'm looking forward to future chapters!

ha. thank you. I guess your right. Data is spelled with a "t". :D
This story is a bit on hold, mainly because I am in the middle of writing a MelloXMatt fic that is taking over my muse. When one decides to show up that is.

Again, thank you (and every one else that has reviewed)!

seems intresting so far. i would like to read more of this story. i hope that you'll have another chapter out soon.
i specally love L's hoarding behavior. its pretty funny, and deffently something that i can picture him doing, specally with candy.

Nice. Very nice. For such a short musing, this was well written and more in depth than most longer fics. I look forward to reading the next chapter, so here's to hoping that a raid of plot bunnies invade your brain. ;)

you characterized L's thought patterns very well, I must say.