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This is nice. Kite seems like such a sweet girl. And it's good to see someone write about a Duskull. Ghost pokemon really don't get enough love in the Pokemon community, at least, not when it comes to fanfiction. And Duskull is one of my favorites so you get bonus points for that. I'd love to see how Kite's relationship with Broadcast progresses.

Please continue. :)

HumanxDusclops/Dusknoir...I'm intrigued. I'll wait until there are more chapters to critique the plot, but...Broadcast? Strange name.

And the paragraphs are very wall-of-texty. You might want to break up the large sections to make it easier to read.

Very cute :) I'm really hoping for more chapters! :D