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for A Game of Poker

by bookkbaby

schedule May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i liked this a lot, it's a pairing i never considered but you made a believer out of me. good job
person BlairBear
schedule October 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I haven't been this obsessed with reading a story sense I first picked up the Hunger Games trilogy. It was absolutely brilliant and I'll be hunting around for the sequel!
person Penelope
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is one of the best stories i have read so far.

The only parings i liked in d-gray man is Yuullen but now im in love with tykixlavi i hope there are more stories out there on it.

The ending is really good but i can't help but wonder what allen was seeing in the mirror, honestly it kind of scared me
person Penelope
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is one of the best stories i have read so far.

The only parings i liked in d-gray man is Yuullen but now im in love with tykixlavi i hope there are more stories out there on it.

The ending is really good but i can't help but wonder what allen was seeing in the mirror, honestly it kind of scared me
person suaviorxchu
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I made it to the end! Which is an achievement, but also sad. I feel that I must thank you for so many hours of wonderful entertainment and a story that improved as it went along. Usually I wouldn't go for this pairing, but once I began this story the way it was written kept me reading and by the end I was loving it so much that I didn't care that it was Lavi and Tyki; I really believed their relationship. I felt sad for Bookman though, but I thought you handled the Lavi vs. Bookman Junior dilemma very well indeed.

One thing I would have liked to have seen more of was the development of the relationship between Allen and Kanda. I loved the touches of sexual tension you added in! I understand that it wasn't their story though.

One of the biggest and most wonderful strengths of this writing was how realistic it seemed with regards to the anime. These events could literally have happened in episodes of D.Gray-Man... aside from the sex of course. If only, eh?! Also at times I feared that the events would veer towards melodrama and Lavi would commit suicide from depression or stop eating or take drugs... I'm so so glad that you didn't write anything like that!

All in all a wonderful, enjoyable, gripping story and thank you very much for sharing!
(Ans shhhush but you may have converted me to liking this pairing. Or maybe it's just the way that you write it <3)
person Emma Gold
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! I would like you to write a story that goes along with this but it be a Yullen. what i mean is that it's from Allen and Kanda's perspective.
person jishe
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well..it's over.
I'm sad and happy at the same time. Thanks God you like happy endings, because i'll kille myself if the two of them had gone two separate ways.
First: thanks for the history. It was the 1 TykiXLavi fic i read, and of course, becuase of yours i'll keep reading them.
Second: Hurra!!! A sequel!!! I love sequels! Because we can read about past characters and see how life has treated them, and of course, because of the new history...Allen and Kanda!
What else? I think that is all! See you soon!!!
person Palumatzu
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the ending to your A Game of Poker story. I had only picked it up a week ago, but i'm a fast reader >_> I'm interested to know if your going to poke at a Yullen fic from this same university, and if you plan to wonderfully end the whole D. Grayman series with Yullen/Lucky slashes =3 I'd love to see the end of the Earl at the hands of a Duo Fic (two slashes in one fic). I'm definitely a subscriber, lol.
person jishe
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The next chapter is the last one!!!
I wanna cry!...don't know why exactly, but i want to... jejejejje
This chapter was slow, yeah!, but it wasn't boring...specially that last conversation with K...it was so beautiful...and he answer all of lavi's questions so perfectly!!!! XD
I write something in you fanfiction page (of course, it was: please a sequel! or something like it), but just in case: PLEASE, A SEQUEL!!!!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, happy new year!!!
Definitively this is a good year...you came back!
Abaout the chapter...well...this last chapter have been all T_T for me....TT-TT Poor Lavi!!! Poor Tyki!!!!! Sexy Tyki!!!...mmm...wait a minute...that doesn't belong here...jejejjeje
So, the end is coming.I'll goo to fanfiction.net to vote but i'm starting her: I WANT THE SEQUEL!!!! YEAH!!!!
Specially because of Kanda and Allen...XD

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