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I have only come across a few fanfics that have lived up to my grand expectations of them. This one, I am pleased to say, is most definitely one of my favourites. Not only is it rife with delish boy love but it also successfully carries a wonderful plot. Well written and extremely entertaining.

I am looking forward to discovering which choice Lavi makes... if it comes down to a choice of course - although a too happy ending always seems to ruin it for me, some semblance of twisty twistyness is always satisfying-. Also looking forward to the no doubt inevitable clash of the titans and the sparks when Kanada and Allen finally admit their obvious want for each other. Mmmmmmm. Maybe they deserve a fanfic of their own, with the storyline after the end of the anime, I would definitely be interested in seeing what sort of plot you could come up with for that. I think im drooling a tad.... one moment.............

I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Although it is getting awfully close to christmas so I wont badger you unmercifully... much. BADGER BADGER BADGER BADGER.... okay thats it.

Just one last thing before I go: Thank you for publishing this and sharing with us rabid boyxboy fans! Awesomeness becomes you! =^.^=

I just spent about a week reading AGOP and although I don't think I would ever usually go for Tyki and Lavi together I just can't help it with this fic.
Lavi should just not be a bookman. In the story or the anime/manga! His personality just doesn't work well with being a bookman and not having loved ones in his life.
I just love your story and love how it's escalated and I really would like to read more so please don't discontinue it! (or let me know if you have)
Update it as soon as you can, I can't wait to read more.
Oh, also I absolutely love Kanda in this story. :)

Hey! I love your story 'A Game of Poker' - finished it in the space of just two days. I am wildly hoping that you will update it again - and soon!
The way you write is brilliant, and I enjoy the way you flesh out the story with the characters' feelings, rather than just leaving it at their actions. It's not easy to find a fan-fic as well written and this one is. And kudos on the engrossing plot and keeping the details and characters so accurate!

I love your story!!!!!Please update soon or i'll go insane!!!!!

Hello,

it took me all day yesterday to read this story, and I finished very late, with my brain completely empty so I didn't think I would leave you a GOOD review, but today I'm back :0 And I must say that first of all, I thoroughly enjoyed your story :D I'm currently watching D.Gray-man (yes, yes, I know, I'm waaaay behind but still :P) and since I stumbled upon the epi with Tykki Mikk, I decided to give your story a try. OMG, I'm so happy I did!

First of all, your Tykki (as you portray him) is not only smoking hot but also quite true to his character! The original one is also very hot (and the voooiiiceeee *swoons*) but admittedly, he's a bastard while you made the transition from a bastard to a likable person plausible and natural. Nothing is rushed there, you take your time and make the transitions smooth.

I love how both Tykki and Lavi never actually say that they like each other, how they struggle to hide their feeling even from themselves. The biggest mistake that author can make is to make two opposite-polar characters say early on that they love each other; the suspense is destroyed and - at least for me - there's nothing to wait for. In the case of your story it's quite the opposite! The expectation is very high, and I virtually can't wait for one of them to break and admit to HIMSELF that he loves the other. Well, Lavi was VERY CLOSE to admitting it, but still ...

What else? Ahh! You played the fact that they are mortal enemies perfectly! While reading the story, one can actually FEEL the barrier between the red head and the Noah of Pleasure, Lavi being the future Bookman and Tykki well, being on the side of the Millenium Baron. And later on, when Tykki actually joins the Black Order and is still not trusted, you cannot help but sympathize with Tykki.

Oh, one more thing, a very small, actually; I loved how you made Tykki play with Kanda's feelings when he joined Allen for meal :D I could almost see steam coming from poor baKanda's ears :D Made me chuckle to no end :D

Ahh, this review grew enormously >_> But I really enjoyed your story so far and looking forward to more, whenever you're going to update. Thanks for your hard work so far and good luck!

teeta

Hey, I really loved this story, it has me completely hooked and I cannot wait for you to update. Sometimes in my head it's almost like, this story is more cannon than cannon. I especially love the scene where Lavi goes back for Tyki!! Are you going to give us more information about Lavi's eye? I'd like to know more about it. I also love their relationship and how you've incorporated all the other character views and all that. I think sometimes the best thing about Tyki and Lavi's relationship is that it can be so completely taboo, I love seeing how different authors write about the relationshop affecting the different characters within the order. I read all of this in one go and really cannot wait for more! Thanks! It's amazing!

I seriously love this story to death!!! Please continue!!! <333333

Hey you there! Finally! A new chapter!
Hope you have a nice trip...travel is the best...of course you require money for that and...i'm kind of poor right now...T-T
Lenalee...i never like her. She is...so stupid! OMG! I hate her! Is so dumb with her big eyes, crying all the time...well, that of the topic, except that like always, she will be the indirect cause of more sufferin for my very-very-very-handsome Tyki! >////<
Anyway. Allen and Kanda...jijiji. And now Tyki suspects! Jejejeje. The last part with the sauce on allen's face...jajajjajjaa. That was magnificent! Jealousy is the best!
And finally...Lavi....well what can i write except he is a TOTAL IDIOT FOR HURTING MY TYKI LIKE THAT! TT-TT Of course, it calms me that at the end, he is the most hurt, because he knows the true and...well...you know...(depress....)
I just go and lie in my bed and cry for them....

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg! You updated! *insert squeal of joy*

I'M GONNA BITCH YOU AND PINCH YOUR EYE (IMAGINE I'M PINCHING YOU EYE)AND BOTTER YOU AND BITE YOU (IMAGINE THAT ALSO)AND PUSH YOUR HAIR (THAT TOO) UNTIL YOU PUBLISH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
WHAT HAPPEND WITH LAVI? IS HE OK? AND TIKY? THEY ACTUALLY ACCEPT HIM OR IS HE GOING BACK TO JAIL? AND ALLEND AND KANDA AND...AND...AND...WELL, YOU GOT THE IDEA.
PD: is not like i got anything else to do except read your fics....well....i got ANYTHING else to do sooo.... XD