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I love this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. This is actually the first D. Gray Man fanfic i've read (I only just got into the anime/manga). So thanks and congradulations on making my firt impression of DGM fics a spectacular one!

OoO''' I haven't realized you are the same writer!!! I mean: of this fic and Canis Luna!!! I'm like >///<..sorry. Should know. it the same kind of stile and of course, our favorite couple too!!!!
Well, anyway. This chapter as you said is kind of...boring...all the battles...T-T I wanted more of Lavi and Tyki!!! But of course, you couldn't just leave the battle in half and make them tall their diferences.
I just hope in the next chapter there will be a little more of them (our couple) and i don't know...something moere of action but in the way of revenge of the Noah to Tyki and despair for Lavi...jijiji, I'm mean i know but...well, that's what i want!!! XDXDXDX
See ya.
PD: I'll be watching your updates closelly!!!

Awesome chapter...Hmmm do I see Tyki being handed an exorcist uniform? Oh dude that'd be awesome! Oh no! Maybe he'd follow behidn with Lavi and Bookman willing! EEEH it's so fun to think about it!

omgomgomgomg u UPDATED!!! ugh, but the cliffhanger was murder! u are quite evil madame (?) hope krory gives jasdevi a spanking *giggle* you never see much Krory/Jasdevi for some reason. i mean it has potential but no one does anything with it. not even fanart. anyhoo, i love your writing and i'm following your canis...the dgm version of little red riding hood. i loves me some LUCKY and Yullen. That reminds me, will yu get some action with allen? he hasn't even told him how he feels yet! what's wrong with that boy?! anyway, can't wait until your next update. i can't wait!

Thanks for the update! I was having an awful day yesterday, but at least I got to read a new chapter of this <3

Poor Tyki. And poor Lavi of course, they really have it hard... But it was nice to see Tyki in (pre-)action again :)

You update fast! And awesome, battle time.

Thought for a second there that Tyki might go evil. Glad he didn't. ;3;

And the pink bunny akuma Kanda slayed sorta reminded me of Lavi. I dunno, don't mind me. lack of sleep makes me weird.

Until next chapter. ^^V

KKKKKKKKKKKKIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally!!! A new chapter!!! You said it will be out soon but...ok...not complaining, better review.
What to say? Actually i don't like fighting chapter (as this) a lot, beacuse it doesn't happen much more...that the fightign. Of course, no matter that, this one is great because is kind of the prologue of the biguest battle of them all: Tyky VS Lavi....jajaja, and i don't really think is going to be a corporal fighting more that a verbal or staring one....jijijiji I know, i nut. I just laugh and laugh, but i love that last sentence with Tyki's thoughts, exactly as a very upset, angry and rengeful woman will speak!!!!!! JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA
See you soon, please!!!!

I decided to stop lurking and registered on AFF.net to review you.

Your story is amazing!

I admit I began to read this because it said "Yullen" in the summary and I'm a sucker for Yullen. But as I continued reading, I found out it's a Tyki/Lavi fic and I /love/ it (and it also has slight Yullen, so it's a win-win).

Also, I'm not quite a fan of angst but if it was all sunshine and rainbows then it wouldn't be as good. And a good ending is always better after hardships. ^^;

In my opinion you did a great job at writing this and I hope you continue to write in the future.

PS: HAVE MY BABIES! ;^;

Thank you, an update always cheers me up. Lavi and Tyki, they so need love. Poor darlings.

(and wow, Allen and Kanda are so cute too!)

I think i cried during all this chapter...except the part of Komui and Reever...but the rest...OMG, my poor eyes.
So, it happen as wanted and Tyki wake up before Lavi leave...and now, i'm not pretty sure i still like that. Poor Tyki..come to my arms!!! I'll confort you...buajajajajajaja, no, kidding. Tyki is Lavi's sweetheart, nobidy else's.
Sooo....Lavi start to consider the idea of not been a Bookman; that must be hard, after all, it's all his life has revolve and start to hate that because some thing else (independent that something else is a wondelrfull and sexy Noah) must be stressfull.
My ilusion now (and i hope it doesn't end like this) is that Allen gets an epiphany and go to speak to...TYKI!!! Ofcourse he must be...now very happy, but maybe that hell a little, specially if Allen describe to him how Lavi is now...without him...T-T I'm crying again...
You write you'll continue soon, PLEASE DO!!!!!