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Chapter 26

Hiya again! Yay, I'm finally caught up!

Sorry I haven't been able to review/comment lately, but we all know about the real world and its annoying habit of intruding on our Fanfiction fun. It's already starting to get down to cruch time at my college, so I'm get less and less leisure time to myself. "Hurry up, Christmas Break" is my healing mantra for now!

But enough about me. I just wanted to say...

AWESOME chapter! If I were a more emotional person, I think I would've been sobbing at the end of the LUCKY scene...so bittersweet! Please don't have them sleep through the rest of the night! They've still got a few more hours, right? Lavi should wake up, kiss Tyki's facial beauty mark (I've always thought of this as such a sexy but loving gesture), the Noah wakes up, and then...well...we all know what would happen next when left in your capable hands! Lol

I also enjoying your Allen & Kanda dynamics. Those two are already funny enough with their animosity towards each other but add in their attraction, and it just makes their interactions even better. Since both of them are still in denial of the other, it's just that much more amusing to watch them skirt the issue. I'm glad you decided to include them. I must admit, they're usually not my pairing of choice, but you have all their little habits and mannerisms down pat, so your interpretation of their actions seem more natural.

I'm also EXTREMELY relieved to see that you'll be continuing to post "AGoP" here. I was almost depressed when you said you might not be. It would have been such a shame to not know what'll happen with this lovely story!

Okay, I guess that's all I have to say for now. Happy writing, and I anxiously await Chapter 27!

'Til next time!
nikita

Oh God! Thanks for the new chater!!! As you said it had a little of everything...of course the first part was the nicer..XD No kiding. I almost get a heart attack with the scene of Allen and Kanda in the bathroom!!! I though my heart was goin to get out of my chest!!! It was so funny and hot at the same time!!! Please...make another...longer this time...maybe with a diferent end...you know what i'm talking about...jijiji
Anyway, thigs are getting complicated. I supouse in the next chapter Lavi is going to wake up...and leave T-T Poor lavi, and poor Tyki. As i ask you in the last one, is he going to tell him anything at all or not? I'm bittibg my nails!!! And of course, the second big incognita: when is the Earl going to strike back? He must be desperate (as i'm) to see Tyki againg and...say hello...OoO
Continue soon!!! In act, don't beta'd!!! Just publish it like that and...make me happy... :)

Uhm... but you will be updating it here right?? >.< I likes reading this sooo much. And I know how you feel one of my other fics get favorited and alert but only a few people review.. Its a bit annoying not getting feedback so I don't blame you. i just hope to be a able to keep reading this.

Hello!

I just have to say that I love, love, love your story. Everything is so natural and believable, and each chapter just leaves me anxiously awaiting the next...which isn't a problem right now since I just finished Chapter 4, so I've got a bit to go.

I can't believe that I haven't run across your story before! I saw the pub. date and thought "Really...I haven't read this yet?! It's got, like, 21 chapters!" I'm a sucker for long stories and even more of a sucker for a long story with an engaging plot, an awesome writing style, and amazing characterization...and this story possesses all of these traits in spades!

And not to mention incredibly hot sex scenes. I was blushing (Yes, literally blushing!) the first time they had sex...and the second... Kudos to you 'cause that doesn't happen very often, I assure you!

Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that you're doing a marvelous job with this and for you to keep doing what you're doing since it won't take me long to catch up! lol

'Til next time!

Hi there! Sorry for the ones who don't review. I undertand it's a lot of work to take the time and write every single chapter and of course, to think what will you put on them, and of course you deserve at least, a coment of it, be good or bad.
This chapter...well, besides the little paragraph at the beginig of Allen (i get all exited when i read the name, thinkg maybe Yuu will be there too) it was all about T and L...they are soo cute!!! Both of them! This lemosn was amazing because they are no longer containing themselfs from the pleasure (especially Lavi) and using Poker as a excuse. Of course, it's also stained with the idea of Good bay...but just from L... poor of him...i'll be crying like an idiot in his arms....TT_TT
Anyway. Will actually L tell him that's the last time they'll be togheter? Or he'll just leave at dawn without a word? Maybe that won't be possible...i don't believe T will just sleep pacefully, specially because last time L left without saying a word...i hope that...

I apologize. I would have reviewed earlier, I just didn't have an account at the time.
I have to say, your writing is wonderful, and helps me develop my own stories.
Sorry I'm not leaving a larger review, I just have an intense headache.

Hi there!!!
OMG! I was like OoO when Lavi and Bookman were talking...i though i was gona die from suspence!!!! And Bookman!!! He gave him another night!!! Of course, i think that will be more painfull at the end but...it's another night after all.
So, when are you going to write a little more Yullen? I love them!!! Specially Yu, he is so easy to bother and when he is angry...ggggrrrr...sexy!!! Jajajaja, yes...i'm nuts.
Just hope ypu continue soon...this is on it climax!!!! I gona pull over all my hair if i have to wait to much!!!

.....I'm sorry that i can write to much but i have to go to the E.R because of a nasal bledding....>///<
That was...you are amazing, thats all i can say...

PD> he let the Innocence!!! Jijijijiji

Ok, this last chapter...intense.
Not only did Tyki rape Lavi (because that was...even if he get little plasure and...he like it at the end...ok, maybe it wasn't...) but the reason why he did it on the firsth place...he is obsesed with him, not in love (for now) but obsesion more that anything. Lavi on the contrary it's realizing his actually fellings. Poor of him. Think that someone you care only wants sex..must be depressing...
It's late...i should go to spleep...but i can't!!! Your fic is to damn good!!!!

Thanks a bunch for the update. Tyki's so sweet in his possessiveness. :)