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I am loving this story :3 I find the story line so far very engaging, and Syn's character very delightful to read. I don't often approve of OC's, but you managed to make a very enjoyable and compelling character. :D You have my stamp of approval. On to Chapter 6!!

Chapter 21:Cine esti tu? - Who are you?=> you should have left out the "you" in your translation. so it should be "Cine eşti?"

Destul de putin lucru. Sange miroase delicios. - Pretty little thing. Your blood smells delicious. => these phrases were almost completely wrong. It should have been: "Ce frumoasă e micuţa. Sângele ei miroase delicios"
I seriously hope you don't mind the corrections. I'm not doing it out of spite. I'm only trying to help. XD The story is great, by the way.

Chapter 18: the carving on the ring should have said "Regina ne-morţii" because no-life queen can not be exactly translated into Romanian we can use a translation of something like the undead queen. I'm from Romania so i would know XD.

well hey there
i have been reading your story for the last couple of days now
much to my surprise i really enjoy it
it is very well written , not many story's capture me as yours did
well im still at ambushed 2 chapter at the moment
i found it funny, those Romanian sentences maybe do to the fact im a romanian citizen
do not trust google translator so much, it doesn't give you the correct way of the sentence
if you have any need of help with them, please feel free to come to me , i will gladly help my favorite author
i wish you good luck on the story, and i will come back with another review when i finish all

Blood heritage was a captivating for a home version of Hellsing. The accents were well done and the characters were right out there. It was good and very well done. (Y)

hihi~

I like this.. is it finished? or have you got more coming?

I hope you continue this wonderful piece of art I like it sooo much.

anywhoo
see ya later
Roz

Loves this story! keep up the good work ^_^ I look forward to more chapters :)

Ive read your whole story in one day, it very very well written. Only critique i have is that as i read on Alucard seems to be getting softer and softer, and a lot of the stuff that has been going on with him and Syn, just doesn't match what i think he would do. Its not necessarily a bad thing, because i cant wait for the next chapter, Keep it up!

lol, i totally have to agree w/ you on the cuddling thing. i have a rather intimidating bf and he LOVES to cuddle. and he's so kwute when he's sleepy too :3 just dun piss him off or he gets down right scary >.>

another great chapter :) I expected that if she took the ring there would be a bit more description of how she felt about it, but maybe that will play out some other time. One other note is that it took me a while to remember what her old job was (DJing, right?), so I didn't understand that right away. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next update!