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Wow, I really like your Dawn stories the most, I blushed and screamed (mainly in embarrassment for dawn) I had to put my Tablet down and recover before reading again. I honestly thought that Dawns mom was going to yell at her and Lila when she walked in on them, but then she joined! Talk about a twist lol.

And then when Nurse Joy invited her... wowza!

I honestly thought that May was going to do something awkward when Nurse Joys cousin bluntly told her about Dawn and her cousin, but she didn't. All in all, it was really great. I wouldn't mind reading one with her mom and lila again (if you're taking requests?)

could you do a chaper with dawn and may

Chapters 3 and on seem to lack paragraphing. Can this be fixed?

y dont u continue

Please hurry and update soon. Can't get enough.

This was almost perfect just needed to be longer but it's still good to have new stuff at all hope for an update as good as this.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Awesome!

I'm really looking forward to the next part of Dawn/Jessie story!

Great new chapter just what i was hopeing for looking forward to whatever you do next.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Outstanding chapter! Hoping to see more soon!

-WinterCold-

Great chapter Zoey does make a super cute slave girl and with dawn as her mistress great but even better with candice added in.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

p.s. two request Karen, Jasmine and i'd love to see Miyamoto Jessie's mother comes back into her daughters life