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A sweet, romantic piece here that I really enjoyed. The romantic air of the story was definitely helped by how you didn't really get in-depth with what exactly they were doing, giving us just enough hints as to what was going on while keeping it sweet and almost innocent; I may not have been writing here long, but I'm pretty sure you could've gotten away with just an Adult rating rather than an Adult+ one. At the same time, Nami's distress is well-portrayed throughout the encounter; she loves Vivi enough to let her go, but she definitely does not like having to do so.

With so much Yaoi in this section, it's difficult to find a good yuri story, so I'm glad you wrote an excellent piece like this one.

This was really good very cute and sweet I've always thought that ViVi and Nami made a very cute couple/

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae