rate_review Reviews

Very interesting beginning with a lot going for this story in the stages of initial build up to something worthwhile plot wise. I like how Franky is trying to figure out a good gift for Sanji to repay his gift of cola flavored cake on his birthday. Sorry to see you have not gotten more attention because your spelling and grammar are actually very good, and this does not read as a rough draft as so many stories do in fan fiction pieces. Thanks for your hard work, and I am glad you shred these two chapters.