rate_review Reviews

Awww, cute and hot. Very true to the manga with their personalities there. Ryo's hesitance and continued objections are very believeable; I could picture it unfolding on the book pages every step of the way. Also, a very hot idea and I like Dee's speech too. Can't help but feel bad for him in the end - Ryo's punishment seems a bit harsh but not OOC - but something tells me when Dee gets horny and stubborn (which I'm sure he will), it won't take too much before that "four week" barrier is tested - and tested again, and again, and again... -snicker- Anyway, kudos to you. Cute story. :)

~Dagger