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Is it wrong that I actually feel a little sorry for Kodachi? And Hikaru continues to surprise. Now, if Ranma can just get to Ryoga's house, maybe he'll find a bank statement or two to lead him to the safety deposit box! As to the Dragon Whisker problem, I seem to recall that problem is actually quite close to correcting itself, Ranma just doesn't realize that. Oh, well. Until chapter 30, then. Laters.

It's interesting how this chapter had very little sex to speak of, but I simply wasn't as interested in it as I was the story progression.

You know you can write well when the story starts to take a higher priority than the erotica.

I know what busy feels like more than ever nowadays; very little time to myself for writing and reading. Just letting you know you're not alone. However, your update is a breath of fresh air, so I felt the need to break away from busy and comment.

I'll refrain from going into a long and elaborate review of all the chapters I didn't get a chance to comment on and just say that the writing quality has not dipped once. Some chapters felt a little imbalanced, but aside from that it's all been good. I was especially happy when Ukyou stepped in.

Even though I like the chapter I was both expecting and hoping for Ryouga to run into Ukyou again and get a little more face time--although they need not be necessarily facing eachother *wink*. Seeing Ukyou degraded is rather fun. Plus I always felt there was some chemistry between the characters--not necessarily romantic chemistry mind you, but I've always enjoyed their team ups.

Involving Kodachi felt odd. I mean, if she was simply used as an outlet for Ryouga to maintain his evil character then that'd make sense, but you're obviously gearing her for a larger inclusion. I'm not totally sure what value she would be to the story, but you're obviously fleshing her out more than the actual series did. With Ryouga giving her such a harsh wake up call with regards to Ranma and Akane, I could easily see him being especially cruel and dragging her over to the Tendos to hear the news from them in person. I got this image in my head of a heart broken Kodachi crying on the floor in front of Ranma and Akane while Ryouga torments her with the truth from the sidelines right before raping her right in front of them. All the while Ryouga's doing this, he verbally blames Ranma for her suffering and just gives a general lecture to him about how he's been stringing the girls along all this time and made them miserable.

Dark? Hell yes. But it's interesting.

Anyway, if you're seeking to break down Kodachi any further, it's food for thought.

It's getting harder and harder to figure out what to do with Haido. I mean, he's a bastard, but he's an empathetic one, no? He doesn't hate any of his victims nor does he wish them any undo wrongs, but at the same time he has a certain capacity for cruelty that makes him controversial. Not to mention he suffers from delusions about what rape truly is, but that can be attributed to the pressure points. The fact remains however that he's been given enough time to develop into his own person with both good qualities and bad ones. As such, assuming Haido is going to be dealt with in one fashion or another, it's probably too late to exorcise him. So the only other alternative would be for him and Jekyll to come together and form a more sensible, socially balanced Ryouga....Or Haido takes over forever. Either way is good.

Thank you for the break from life. Until next time.

Soo, was this a good progression or a bad one? Either way, at least the real Ryoga managed to get out for a few moments. And I actually find myself pitying poor Kodachi. Yeah, this could have gone worlds better. Well, we'll see what you do next, I guess. Until chapter 29, then. Laters.

---Interesting. Do you plan on bringing Shampoo into Haido's clutches as well?

Seriously, you are upping the level here. First it was plain Domination stuff, but now you are moving into a hentai dungeon theme. I can see Haido making Kodachi his second, as they seek to punish Akane and the redheaded girl. Plus, there will be time for Ranma-kun to get his own taste of domination here.

Happy writing, and update soon!

Well, that was suprising. I'm wondering if you decided on doing Kodachi because you were a bit blocked on the main story line? Not sure where you go from here. Kodachi is not the most stable of people, who knows how she's going to react. There is a a wide variation. Normally I'd suggest she become a co-conspirator with Ryouga, but Ukyou's already been selected for that role. I could easily see Ryouga taking great pleasure in slave training the haughty rich girl, putting her into the same category as Ranma and Akane. I know one thing Ryouga could not tolerate if Kodachi becomes a full cast member. Her attitude about Ranma. One of the first things he would set out to do would be to show Kodachi the truth, and also show that Ranma is not worthy of her desire. In my opinion anyway.

In any case, glad to see you back and looking forward, already, to your next offering.

Awww man! I show up here for the first time in an eternity hoping against hope to find something half way decent and end up stumbling across the friggin' Fountainhead of Ranma 1/2 erotica--AND IT'S UNFINISHED!

This fic is absolutely amazing. I'm less than a third of the way through and it just keeps getting better.

It seems as though the writer has finally given up the ghost on writing though, so I'm in tears that I'll inevitably finish reading a story that has no real end. *tears*

Wow that was intense.

Loved it as ever and that bitch Ukyo got raped. I love when she gets what she deserves.

Now can the rest of the guys do her in a never ending gangbang?

Sadist Sid

Ukyou certainly has a talent for the nasty. Looks like she's going to bring a womans touch to the enterprise. Poor Akane and Ranma. I have to say, however, that I don't find the prospect of Ukyou making male type Ranma do her very interesting. Hyocritical of me I know. But I honestly don't think she'd find the experience satisfying. She might get sex from him, but she wants way more from Ranma than that, and there is no way she can make him give her that.

Man, where to begin? This is a pretty solidly written piece of agony, and I've been enjoying it overall, though this last chapter had me pacing around for about an hour in a haze of, well, anger. This is not a bad thing, rather it's just a statement that your writing managed to hit me in a meaningful way, though perhaps not in an expected one.

In truth, it's actually the second time as well - the first was "Hyde-Side" Ryoga's torturing of logic to make himself sound the hero; playing the victim card while victimizing his so-called oppressors was a rather masterful stroke of hypocrisy, and you wrote it so it managed to hit me just so. It is a very human thing to twist shit around to justify ones actions, but I ended up hating him rather more than the first villain. Even though Michio is arguably the worse of the two, his horrible justification is simply so much more mundane.

And now, Ukyo has gotten the treatment and my reaction is much the same. Bravo. I always found her rather boring in canon, and now you've managed to get me to have a strong feeling about her. Granted that feeling is seething rage, but it's something and much stronger than I normally feel about depictions of her. Much like with Ryoga, it's the expertly twisted illogic around a seed of burning hypocrisy - the "truth" can only be what she wants to hear. Granted it's a fairly common hypocrisy, but it usually doesn't involve torture. With Ryoga, at least, it's a twisted mirror of his actual personality, which is still present, if subdued.

Ukyo is just a colossal bitch, and while I can't predict whats coming next (aside from more twisted sex, of course), I must admit that I do hope, most sincerely, that she gets what's coming to her.

I've been keeping up with the story since it started, but i really got to say that the idea of adding Ukyo to the equation is a terrible idea. would of prefer that you killed her off, but then i just hated Ukyo in a general since since she was first introduced in the manga. I look forward to what you plan on doing but I have ideas and not too fond of 'em.