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I just love this story, can't wait for the next chapter, what i'm really looking forward to is when Ranma and Akane get the cure that is going to be a great read. Keep up the outstanding writing.

Once again, frying pan, fire, etc.... On the plus side, Ryoga will most likely tell her the actual truth now, and hopefully Ukyo will actually let herself hear it, but I suppose that would be too much to ask? Again, though, Gosunkugi comes out as the only decent one aside of our heroes and their two "secret" allies. Well, until chapter 28, then. Laters.

Glad to see you're back writing again. I love, love, love this story. Each chapter is like a cherished gifts.

Thank you,

Sid

Yeah, I suppose cannon events that occurred subsequent to the moxibustion arc would still occur in this twisted reality regardless, it will be interesting to see what you do with the Dragon Whisker story. As for Akane and Ukyo, well, maybe Akane will tell her what's really going on and that will bring Ukyo back down to earth? I mean, Akane's weakness is prrof enough. Oh, boy... Oh, yeah, and kudos on getting this one out so fast. Until chapter 27, then. Laters.

and Ukyou now enters the story as a principal character, I hope. I'm guessing she's going to find out very soon that she's bi, which adds a whole other element to her desire for Ranma. And the way this story runs, she's going to find out that she really enjoys putting little sluts in their place. That is unless Akane gets rescued of course.

That is actually something I see being very important in the following chapter. Ryouga sent Akane out at night alone, and now she's vanished. He's likely going to 'interview' the boys to make sure they haven't decided to stash Akane away somewhere. But I'm hoping their is enough of the old Ryouga left that he can feel dread and guilt over what might have happened to her. Ranma of course is not going to be a happy camper either, and both he/she and Ryouga are not going to be able to take it easy.They're going to have to go out trolling for something more dangerous than dumpling men with a pigtail fetish.

I did like the way Ryouga 'played with Ranma' in this chapter, and Ranma's reaction. She no longer seems to feel shame or degredation, merely severe annoyance. Makes it much easier to read to tell the truth than if it was given the full dark treatment with the girls reacting in real world terms.

Welcome back. And you came back with a bang too. A very good chapter with lots of fun abuse. Though I'm sure Ranma does not see it that way. Akane on the other hand. . . More foreshadowing with Ukyou. I have no trouble seeing her doing some pretty nasty stuff to Akane, but I would sort of like to see her rehabliatated to a certain extent. Frankly, given her past history I think she's a very logical candidate to use the magic of the series to turn into a guy, which would add an interesting element to the situation.

There is only Kasumi left in the house now, and I really have to wonder about how clueless she is. You can't hide secrets like this from the person who does the laundry and housekeeping. She's either a lot stupider than I think she is, or is ignoring things for her own reasons. There is part of me that would love to see her join in, on Ryouga's side, as her little sister has needed some serious disipline for a long time. Or take this chance to go out on her own,leaving Ryouga alone at home with Ranma and Akane. The possibilities for certain scenes if he had no fear of discovery would certainly be fun.

Somehow, I think that little boat excursion would have been more comfortable in the spring or summer time, but I digress. And Hikaru continues to gain respect, I must say. Though I must also admit to perfectly understanding his reasons. As to the close, yeah, should have seen that one coming, though sadly Ryoga covered it well. And somehow I think he's going to step things up a bit now that Soun and Genma are out of the equation for a while...though there is still Nabiki and Kasumi... Ah, well. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.

Just looked at your correction of chapter 24, and yes, that works, makes much more sense now. And since I forgot before, Ukyo really needs a shrink, doesn't she? At least she trying to control her anger, but for how long? Oh, well. Again, laters.

---Sheesh, the perverts just keep getting kinkier. Still, it could be worse for our intrepid protagonists . . . Shampoo could get into the game!

Do me a favor and see to it that Ukyo gets hers in the end . . . even if you have to add her as forced slave-whore number three in Michio's little group. Not sure how you'd do it, considering how the moxibustion is gone, but she would deserve it.

Nice to see you back in action. Don't wait too long to update next time, got it?

I have to congradulate you on Ryouga. He's really evil here. And yet we get a teaser that maybe he's as much a victim as Ranma and Akane. He might come out of this more traumatized than they are if things don't go right.

Very effective "DUM DA DUM" moment featuring Ukyou, and that Strap on certainly sets the stage. Be interesting to see how nasty she can be. There is a reason the Indian's used to turn prisoner's over to the women.

I do have a quibble, it's wholly because of my bias and likely not shared by everyone. It was Ryouga keeping Ranma male, and actually getting him to steer Ryouga into Akane. A mervelous bit of nasty on Ryouga's part, but I can't help but think he would be uncomfortable as hell with a guy handling his junk. In my own mind he just covered well and really ground Ranma's nose in the dirt at the same time. For my preference I'd just as well prefer it if Ranma were not male during these little sessions.