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Yes, the partial cure, I predicted that. And geez fate really tried to do a number on them right then, huh? Though frankly I find it odd that there would even be ice cold water in a greenhouse, I'd think the heat of the inside would prevent it from getting that cold. But, hey, what do I know? And, hey, at last Akane and Ranma have full sex together! Wahoo! Now, again, if they could just realize there's something terribly wrong with Ryoga, since the real Ryoga did manage to push through for a moment there... And to be honest, I'm surprised that Ukyo's still trying to get Ranma after what he did to her in the mountains in retaliation for her raping him. It'll be interesting to see what she has in mind, especially after she finds out Ranma's been back for awhile now. And do I really even want to know what's going to happen when she finds out what those two have been up to in her home? Well, until chapter 25, then. Laters.

Ummmmm, another strokable chapter from the master of dark lemons. I salut you my friend can't wait to read the next one.

Kisses

Sid

Still waiting on the next chapter. I can understand a busy life, but the least you could do is give us an estimate on when it will come out!

"I suppose that makes me evil. But it's a kind of evil that remembers being something else."

That line is just EPIC. I didn't think anyone could make Hikaru Gosunkugi look cool, but there it is. I salute you, good sir. Well done.

Just out of curiosity, how long will it be before you can get Chapter 24 together?

---Still waiting on the next chapter. Was kind of hoping it would be out faster.

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Thank you so much for continuing this story! I'm glad to see the Hiroshi/Daisuke elements have been added to the story, and the new twists with Ryouga are amazing. But you left us with such a cliffhanger!

'What' exactly is it that he has planned for Ranma for Christmas Eve which would be especially perturbing for Ranma? Is he going to make her dress in a ribbon and be a present? Is she going to have to kiss various people with the addition of mistle toe?

Or is it something non-Christmas related such as he's going to make her wear a slave collar or a maid uniform or some such demeaning thing? Or is he going to put on her body some symbol of his ownership such as a tattoo or engagement ring? Or will it be something behavior related such as making her sleep with him in the same futon or making her call him by a pet name or a name of dominance?

Also what are his plans for Akane? It seems clear that he no longer feels that she is as pure as the falling snow. So how will his new outlook affect his use of her in comparison to Ranma?

And what about Gos? It seems clear that he still plans to proceed with his plans for the taming of Ranma using Akane as a pawn.

I know you have a real life difficulties with your time so I will not plead for an immediate chapter, but I urge you to continue to carry this story on. Read reviews such as mine if you ever start to feel as if no one cares. Make sure that you don't lose your enthusiasm for this story, because your fans are like a bevy of addicts. Each of us are waiting anxiously for the time when we can get that next fix. And, while we go through the most painful withdrawals when we can't get one fast, we would rather be able to feel that high of another chapter release than to have to quit cold turkey and suffer such pains forever more. ;)

great chapter, im on the edge of my seat waitting the the next one

Even when she shouts it out in a horny stupor, you're still not quite sure whether she's consciously put Ranma in that position or not. That ambiguity makes for the most realistic approach to Akane's ever-growing perversion.

It wouldn't be necessarily out of character at this point for her to consciously want to do those things to Ranma, but all the same it would sound rather OOC for her to come out and honestly admit such a thing. So rather than risk a literary juxtaposition that distracts from the erotic decor, you took the wiser "fantasy" route that Akane may or may not be consciously using to take advantage of Ranma. Either way she's made out to be delusional.

I don't get the feeling that you're really gonna let Ranma and Akane finally consummate their relationship as they intend. So I'm really interested to see that development.

And what of Ukyou? Will she make another appearance or have you genuinely lost track of her (not that it's a big deal)?

I imagine that if you're going to involve any comeuppance--and I'm sure you are--Ukyou would be the one to receive the brunt of it considering that her particular betrayal towards Ranma doesn't have a "pressure point" excuse to fall back on.

Great installment!

Another fabulous chapter, this is my favourite story of all times.

Thanks so much for writing more and can't wait for the next one.

Sid