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Another good chapter. I'm enjoying Hiroshi and Daisuke, and looks like Ranma and Akane are not going to be the only ones sore and humiliated. Ryouga is proving to be a good bad guy. But I have to wonder how Ranma is going to feel when he discovers that Ryouga's Perversion pressure points have been pushed, and some of them are still active. He knows first hand what that can do to a male's mind. And I wonder what the long term effect on Ryouga will be. Hard to believe that he'll simply go back to normal after all this time.

The same goes for Akane and Ranma. I think their deluding themselves if they think that life will go back to normal once they are cured. Akane is pretty much addicted to a level of sex that I don't think Ranma can give all by himself. And Ranma is heading that way 'herself. Going to be interesting to see where everything goes.

And yay, more concensual sex, sorta... And I'm guessing that other thing he intends to make Ranma do is adjust his curse the same way Ranma's is? Well, at least we're kind of getting somewhere now. If they could just figure out what's really wrong with Ryoga, like say a brief regaining of control by the real him, perhaps. Well, until chapter 24, then. Laters.

An excellent chapter as ever.

I love how evil Ryoga is turning out to be, I can't wait for the next one.

Yes you may be a little slow between chapters sometimes but what you post is worth the wait.

Oh well, keep up the wonderful work, you're the Lemon King, it even says so in my FF profile :)

Well, Akane's certainly acting like a professional tramp at this point. Her shame has all but evaporated. Hers was truly a seamless transition. Even with her acting so flagrantly promiscuous with Ranma, Hiroshi, and Daisuke, her outrageous behavior still felt within her character according to the rationalizations she's offered up of simply getting in practice time--I especially enjoy how you're not totally sure whether or not she's conscious of her own perversity throughout her ordering Ranma to act like a slut, and not to mention her domineering attitude towards Daisuke. Bravo for that.

And the best part is that she's unknowingly dragging Ranma down that same path with her. At this point however, I wonder if you're really going to allow Gos to reap the fruits of his labor or have it all snatched out from under him by Ryouga--who may or may not be cured int the future. Either way, I am rather interested to see how Akane will be able to talk Ranma into having sex with Hikaru willingly. I imagine that she'll have to distract her with some sapphic attention while Hikaru sneaks up on her, and Akane makes sure to calm Ranma while he gradually rides her down.

I don't personally mind either way as long as Ryouga still gets his piece like he did with Ranma and Akane. I'm sure you realize that I especially loved that bit where he told Akane that she couldn't compare to Ranma while he was plugging her. Even in the midst of her disgust, she felt jealousy at playing second fiddle and arousal for seeing Ranma getting fucked and subsequently reciprocating. That was just awesome.

And to wrap it all up in a nice tight bow, it was especially satisfying watching Ryouga kick Michio and co. around. I looked forward to the briefing he has prepared for Ranma and Akane. It probably wouldn't do to let them know that he's commandeered the photographs since that would remove their incentive to do as the other boys say. So I'm rather curious about that.

Anyway, great work on the last three chapters.

In response to the last few emails, I honestly wouldn't be surprised if Ranma does it of her own free will at this point. Ryoga is his mistake, and he is doing this because Ranma couldn't tell Akane about the little porker while he was still sane. Odds are, Ranma will soon feel the need to be punished.

Either that, or he'll need to do it to earn Akane's forgiveness.

Well, on the plus side, we finally had a consensual sex scene, that's something. And as much I enjoyed Ryoga taking care of the pictures and torturing Michio, and later Kaori, somehow I don't think this is really an improvement, per se. And I find the revelation of Hikaru secretly holding out on him surprising, as well as that "training of Akane and Ranma" comment. Training for what, might I ask? Well, until such time as you finally give us chapter 23, then. Laters.

I found the beat down by Ryouga very satifying. One of the things I really detest about this genre, guys blackmail girls, is that almost always every thing just falls into place for them. No setbacks, no suggestion that karma might bite them on the ass. I'm sure that eventualy things will alter in regards to Ryouga as well.

It seems pretty clear to me from this and previous chapters that Hikaru has some really long range plans in mind. Going to be interesting to see how he works in the new enviroment. Wonder how Ryouga's hyper competitive streak will react to this scrawny little wimp being bigger than he is. Of course he's far stronger and more skilled, but in the end he's a guy, and there is no denying that he does not measure up.

Two months, no update, whyyyyyyy? You literaly have 10x more hits on this story than any other current story. Things seem to be coming to a head with Rouga in Nerima, and people starting to rebel. Come on man, Akane is begging to be trained!

Looks like we've got almost all the players involved now. Only Ukyou unacounted for. I'm not seeing Ryouga kicking the other guys out of the pussy pool, but I'm sure he's going to lay down his version of the law on them. Hiroshi and Daisuke undercover rapists could be interesting. I just had this weird idea where Akane suggests things to they could do to her, and Ranma, in order to fit in with the other guys due to the fact that they're pretty vanilla when it comes to thinking up anything past straight sex. After all, to really win the trust of the other guys, they're going to have to appear pretty hard core, or so Akane might reason, for her own reasons.

Ryoga is a real bastard in this story. I love this new chapter, you are the porn king!

Gotta go find my husband ;P

Later