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I so want to draw them for you. and sorry about the boyfriend :C -hugs-

my heart broke omg whyyy please q_q where am I supposed to find other stories like this? -sobs- my life what is life I feel incompleteeee

love this so muchhhh!!!!!!

You can't do this to your readers!! I'm sure I'm not the only one who loves your story. It's terribly sad if you stop writing for this story. It's really well done I don't see that many stories that do an excellently balance plot with adult content. Hell, it's even rarer to see it in a Pokemon story. Again, I love the story and I hope to see it completed one day. If not, have you thought about writing short stories or something? Maybe it'll help you get back into writing or something? I can tell you're talented and it'll be ashame to not read more of your works.

I just read through your story, I find it cute and heartwarming, I like it, and I look forward to seeing more of it. Tried to explain why I like it more but I just sounded pompous so I'll leave it at that.

Absolutely fabulous story, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Yay, part 2 :D

Also, thought you might like to know - you have the beginnings of an appreciation thread on the pokemon chan.

http://151chan.org/canalave/res/1227.html

love this story! I love the message and the plot and its just interesting and entertaining to read and I love the Pokemon's POV, its my fav part :) I wanna write Pokemon like that
please update soon!

~LadyDee

You have no idea how excited I was to see this story updated. This is, without a doubt, the greatest Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read EVER so I'm glad to see that you are still working on it. :3

Drake's naughty dream made me giggle. Oh puberty. Much LULZ were had at is expense. But then Evelyn got all curious and I was like "Well then... AHEM. Carry on."

Claire and Evelyn have quite an interesting dynamic. Still, I can only imagine how awkward it must be to have one of your girlfriends come onto you. ...When you're changing in front of her. That Claire; she's crazy like a fox.

And I really enjoyed the adventure that all Evelyn's and Claire's Pokemon had. It reminded me of an episode of Pokemon, only better and I knew what the Pokemon were saying without having to read subtitles. xD I'm glad Alvaro evolved. He was so cool the way he defended and looked out for Isaac. And the way he got so excited about Issac's presents and evolving and having hands to hold things with was so PRECIOUS. :3 Ah, I do love me some ghost pokeymanz. Of course, the conflict between Richard and Magmar was just as entertaining; that Richard is such a charmer. ;)

Loved, loved, LOVED this update. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, I hope the egg evolves soon; then Evelyn will have a solid team of six! :)

Glad to know this is still going. Want to see where the Draco/Evelyn thing is going.