rate_review Reviews

I am so happy you are back! *does extra happy dance* This is still my favorite story on AFF. The characters are great, the story moves along at a good pace, and it ALWAYS leaves me wanting more. I wish there were more stories like this that I knew about, as the scenery is always created vividly in my mind (which shows how good you are at writing). I keep thinking about how some day I need to draw a picture of Draco and Evelyn...

Awesome chapter. The transition into steamy-ness doesn't seem to be having a negative effect on the pacing, so you successfully dodged Everyone's Problem!

Oh, wow. I must say that I like this... :) Please continue when you get the chance.

This is such a great story! I hope that you can update again soon (I know, I'm one of those *poking* people). Still, it is one of the best, if not THE best story I have read for pokemon. Keep up the great work! I hope your life is going good in the new year!

I really like the story, actually it inspired me to give writing a shot

http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600048695

chapter 1 has grammer errors (so does chapter 2)

but ive gotten complimants on the actual story, so yeah! read it its not bad
(And the hair thing I accidently took from draco :P sorry didnt realize into after)

I'm really loving this. Claire's such a bitch, and her bitchy explanation for being a bitch only makes her seem like a bitchier bitch. I love it.

Wow, I feel like a traitor - I took this off my check-daily list not a week ago, having given up hope it would be continued, and you come back with an excellent chapter straight away!

I just love the way all of the characters have such diverse personalities, and the way they interract. Can't wait for the next update! (:

Awesome new chapter, I'm sorry about your depression.

Smut soon please.

look im not a... ok maybe I am a complainer. but I came in here look for a lemon and god damnit i don't care anymore, i want to know whats in the god damn box! and you havent updated in like a few monthes so im starting to think you never will, i don't even care about the lemon anymore(ok maybe a little).

I know you have a life and you don't nessesarily come home thinking "I can't wait to get home and right a chapter" but i want to know what happens... badly

well thats it for my little episode there, but ignoring that your a very talented writer andyou do well with the "smutsy" stuff. i would like to see more of your writing if you have some

wow... i love it. cant wait 2 read more. but u r aware that a shiny charmander/charmelion is gold not black right? it only turns black when it becomes a charizard. update soon.