rate_review Reviews

i am so glad to see this story finally finished here, it's definitly one of my favorites. i can't think how the new version could improve on it.

(addendum)there's the usual spelling and punctuation mistakes of course, and it'd be nice if they could stay in the present at the end (and rio's ssj imitation if i'm honest) otherwise, i can't see a reason for another version

I love this story. Its so well detailed and there are a few concepts that pokephillia authors don't like to get involved with. Pokemon/human pregnancy is one of them. But not only you did good you elaborately explained them too. And the last cliffhanger is awesome though i would be lying if i didn't say its bugging the hell out of me that what happened to felix and luca??Just one more chapter?huh?pretty please?

U R SO LUCKY YOU DIDNT KILL HIM OFF OR I WOULD OF KILLED YOU AND ATE YOUR SOUL, good story btw

Hey Felix, even though I haven't reviewed any other chapters of this story I do hold them in high regard. This might not really be a compliment but each time I read this story, I always try to re-enact the chapters with my Pokemon figures. Of course its kinda hard to act out intimate scenes using toys, (but I manage). But even though I try to stick with the story, I end up "customizing" it a little with my own persona and story. So what I'm trying to say is, your story is a inspiration to me. And even as I type, I'm getting more and more ideas. But just so you won't freak out, I'm NOT going to post my WIP on here. Because it has a bunch of other authors' storylines to it as well. Well I've rambled too long, so wish me luck on actually writing my story on actual paper. See ya!

Hope you write more to this.
Bit a cliff hanger, would like to see what happens to Felix in the "past"
Also waiting for the moment Leo tells his parents what exactly he did.

Although I cannot stand a cliffhanger without signs of a sequel Luca's Saga was fantastic. I whole-heartedly hope you continue this story because like I said; I hate cliffhangers.

I'm editing my review, to say that I would be thrilled to see how long you can keep this going. However, if you want to cap Luca's Tale off here, (Okay, that sounded weird, anyways) then I must request that you make a "Luca's Saga (Part 2)." Granted, your tale isn't focused on the "mouthwatering," sections that people can't get enough, you've really made each of your characters well-defined, and it just wouldn't suit Felix and Luca's family and friends to end it with one final chapter, or one fic.

My thoughts on fic. thus far remained as in my original review: some minor confusion with who said what, but that's hardly worth complaining about due to the uniqueness of each character, and the minor spelling errors you make, those too can be overlooked by simple means of rereading what's going on to make sure the right term is used. Kudos for making such an amazing story!

Side note: Some of the scenes will totally blow your mind away if you apply background music, while others will, ahem, "excite" you faster. Not sure why, but it must be psychological thing when reading. My apologies for the long review, and my mildly crude humor, but this is worth the effort for future readers. :^D

~silent writer~

It should be noted that chapter 5 and 18 have been edited to add the parts that were missing previously so you don't have to search for them anymore.
All that's left now is to wait for the next chapter to come. I hope it'll come soon, I've been reading this story since last year (on the other site, that is) and I still can't get enough of it.

Yeah, I noticed that when I got to 18 - I hadn't bothered to check to the end of 4 to see if it had been repaired.

Just re-reviewing. My last review was left at the end of chapter 17 and - now at the end so far - goddamn if this wasn't the biggest tearjerker I ever read. Amazing stuff.

As I read through, the names of two most current chapters became more and more ominous. Just when I thought it was going to wind down, they're split up again!

I hope you find time to create the next chapter soon!