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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic.
I just wish I didn't have to keep finding mirrors to read the missing chapters.
I just wish I didn't have to keep finding mirrors to read the missing chapters.
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As the others said, a couple of chapters are missing in this story. I'm sure this will be fixed soon.
If you guys want to know about those missing chapters that much, you can check them out in the fics section at agnph.com (the story is titled Luca).
If you guys want to know about those missing chapters that much, you can check them out in the fics section at agnph.com (the story is titled Luca).
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What happened between 4 and 5? It's so confusing and I'd love to read the story but I can't get past this.
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is excellent. However, I have a few complaints. 1) Spelling, punctuation, grammar, word use, etc. You could benefit heavily from a beta. 2) There are a few serious gaps, most notably between chapters 4-5 and 18-19. What happens there? There may be more, but those are the ones that really stick out. I almost stopped reading after 4 because I figured I'd missed too much. 3) It's not finished! *PLEASE* finish it!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What can I say but needs to be in Genral so more people will see it!
I loved it!
Bit enough words to say how great it is!
I loved it!
Bit enough words to say how great it is!