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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is ok but next chapter i think next chapter you should have keitaro plow shinobu and motoko in the ass and mouth in that order
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was beyond hot and i honestly can't wait for more. i loved every sentence of this chapter and know i'll love all of the future ones too.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness.
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome job, this is easily my new favorite love hina story. it's kinda funny though. the motoko/shinobu story i'm doing right now is a dom/sub too, except mine is motoko being the sub and shinobu being the dom. i'll have it done soon and i hope you'll like it.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twsiteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twsiteddarkness
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can assume there's more?
A bit faster then most would probably like, but still interesting. I look forward to any continuations.
A bit faster then most would probably like, but still interesting. I look forward to any continuations.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is pure GOLD! I fell in love with it the second i saw the summary. I'm writing a Shinobu x Motoko story at the moment and this has helped to inspire me. it'll be the next story i put up and i'll definately be keeping an eye open for updates on this jewel of a story.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, intrigue! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please write more this is sounding good