rate_review Reviews

A nice mix of humor and sexfulness, and manages to answer a few questions about Magnemite anatomy. Well done.

Also contains one of the greatest lines in all literature, ever.

"At one time, he could jack off to the refrigerator easily..."

THAT'S IT, INTERNET'S OVER. EVERYBODY GO HOME. XD

There are definitely not enough Jasmine fics, and i've never seen one with Magnemite. Highly original work, in my opinion. I enjoyed it.

The very first thing i have to say is the Magikarp salesman got what he deserved I hate that guy….Well anyways about the story I’m not sure what to say other than it was strange but in a good way I read this for the same reason I read Sinners a mixture of boredom and curiosity and just like it I liked it a lot I never would have thought of a pokemon like Magnemite like that anyway good story hope to see other stories from you in the future.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I usually don't bother reading the little lemon oneshots that pop up here, but in your case I had to make an exception. I was interested to see how anyone was going to make a lemon with a genderless Pokemon. I expected the usual horrible prose, overuse of four-letter words, and overall a mess of a story.

I did not find that here.

I'm careful about the stories I review, because when I leave a bad one people tend to attach that to my own stories. I'm not going to leave a bad review here because you don't deserve one. Your story had me smiling the whole way through, and I'm glad I took the time to read it. I thoroughly enjoyed your portrayal of a loving genderless Pokemon and its attraction to its Trainer. If it weren't for my usual nitpicks (it's just a personal thing, but I hate the word pussy, some things are told to the reader rather than shown) and some formatting issues (Eevee's name only has four e's in it, some paragraphs cut off mid-line and go to the next), I would have to give you 5 stars.

If you write any more lemon like this, please keep me posted. My email address is on my author page.

Thanks for your kind review! ^^ glad you enjoyed it!