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Thanks for the update, the smutlet was highly appreciated. ^-^ Thank you again for this wonderful chapter and for continuing to post to this website despite it's flaws (at least until the fic's end). For you wonderful author/beta combination:

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Great job, I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Please update again as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just recently (about a few hours ago) discovered this absolutely wonderful fanfic of yours and am left wanting more. I try to refresh the page for chapter 9, but for some reason, it just isn't working. *Tries it again* Regardless, thank you both for sharing your talents, and posting chpts 1-8 so far, please finish up this story on Aff if possible, and thank you for the aforementioned warning of the site change.

Wow.
Jus'. wow.
"....swirled around him like old bathwater." = EPIC. xD

Man, the thing 'bout Barbar cracked me up, too. Perhaps this is NOT the right thing ta be readin' at 4am...
(was laughing throughout nearly the entire thing)
I know...i find odd things funny.
I'm totally lovin' the almost-raep, by the way. (drool).
xD

Why did Bookman beat Lavi-chan (or HAVE him beaten, if Lavi was tellin' the truth 'bout tha'...) so badly this time?
My guess is tha' he somehow saw/found out 'bout the kiss. But...i could always be wrong, so...
But, man...tha' woulda hurt a whole Helluva lot. x.x

I think it's totally cute tha' Kanda can talk ta Lenalee (albeit reluctantly) 'bout this stuff. It's always great ta have someone ta go ta, if ya need support (whether ya want it or not...i know from experience).

Anyhoodles, i'm glad ya managed ta update so soon (in my opinion.....well, "soon" compared ta MY updates, anyhow. xD).
I'm totally in love with this story, so every time i see a new chapter's been posted....
Me: 8D
In any case...i hope yer both doin' well (how's school?), an' i can't wait ta read what happens next.
Take care~

Not bad at all. They're both pretty messed up, it seems, but it did surprise me the amount of humanity that Kanda is showing so soon. Not that I would complain about that. You write this kind of Kanda beautifully. Keep up the good work!

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ah fun, a tortured Kanda and a weaker Lavi....I can't think of anything more perfect. I'm really waiting on the next chapter cause these days there just aren't enough KandaLavi fics out there.

Great work so far.

- Incessant_Darkness

Well....first of all, wow. Jus'...wow. This is brilliant - as is all yer guys' writin'. I'm once again, totally blown away.

An' dun worry 'bout the angst. I totally git where Kanda's comin' from. I've kinda been in the same mind-set fer 'bout 5 years, after all... But it's a nice break ta read 'bout someone else havin' those problems fer a change, even if it is jus' fiction.

As fer the uke-Lavi bit, tha' jus' makes me extremely happy. I ain't a big fan of seme-Lavi...at all.

Anywho, i REALLY like how ya guys have started this! I can't wait ta read more. ^^