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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good Story!
Not sure on the way you change veiws and their are a couple of grammer errors/typos but nothing the cry about.
Hope to see the next chapter soon
Not sure on the way you change veiws and their are a couple of grammer errors/typos but nothing the cry about.
Hope to see the next chapter soon
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for more. please update soon.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
u should really continue writing this it seems like itll b a good story.