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Sweet!! Looking foward to the next chapter.

Oooh, didn't expect to see this updated. Some good, light-hearted fun here, despite all the gore and whatnot.

HOLY SHIT I REPLY TO THESE THINGS

If anything I also want to continue my series.

I do try to keep it fun but also dark. Life is filled with good and bad times, so why wouldn't Jonathan's be any different? I want him to be a character that shows both contrasts between his lighter happy side and his more darker serious side.

Thanks for the comments and thanks everyone for the hits! >1234 is great and I hope more will read!

its interesting so far. please update soon.

I love Darkrai too, that is why I wanted to use him! Don't worry about it if you think you are offensive, I'm totally chill.

As for a second chapter, I just uploaded it.

Well, you had a better reaction than the last guy I reviewed.

I knew you didn’t intend that Jon and Kate thing. I just saw it and rolled with it. And as for the Stormglade name, I’ve heard stranger. I’m not looking to be a jerk, I’m just a little set in my ways. My biggest pet peeve is the little stuff, formatting and sentence structure, etc. I dig Lucario and Darkrai.