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I really like your story and I hope you continue. Also can I get some more Zoro action because he mostly gay on this site. Maybe team him up with Luffy vs Vivi and Robin...Nami near the end?

For me it was the general point of Zoro getting laid. Zoro (aside from Franky.) is the only member of the crew who I'd rather shoot myself in the face than read having sex. Especially with Robin.

I did like the bit with Nami (Never enough Robin/Nami yuri.) however. And a shame no Chopper, considering him and Luffy are the only male crew members I'd even consider reading in a sex fic with Robin I'll wait with bated breath for the Robin/Luffy scene.

Quite enjoyed this so far. It's a different pairing. One that is very underloved. The only thing I didn't like was the whole Robin/Zoro scene. Ruined the whole fun of the story. Will we be seeing her with other crewmembers? More specifically Luffy, Nami or Chopper? I do hope so.

Well, d'okay. I can understand your reasons for such a thing. But definitely no YAOI, that I cannot stress enough!

Excellent story, very imaginitive. Hope you continue.

Fun fic, would like to see more. As far as your use of Japanese and other `phrases', I will just say that Zorro is no more Japanese then Zorro is French. Also, words like `san', `chan' and others do not translate well into English. You can improvise, but you end up with false conotations and a loss of the unique meanings the word carry in it's original language.
SailorNemesis

Now this is a great AU story with an original and rare pairing to go with it. Not saying to take the RobinXVivi pairing out or anything, but you do realize that Luffy is probably the only guy capable of draining Vivi when she gets like that, right? I'm just saying that you could probably turn the pairing into a threesome with Luffy in it as well as having Vivi go with the Straw Hats when they leave Arabasta or have her meet up with them after Skypeia and before Water 7.