rate_review Reviews

I don't get why you have so few views. If anything your story (while deathly hard to follow at times) can be seen a a counterpoint/complament to Sinners done by Slash Firestorm. I would almost call this the dark story to his light story. Please try to update again soon, as I enjoy reading yours work .

I can understand the slow updates. I myself am working on several chapters/arcs of a story i started YEARS ago. not that i have been able to finish a single chapter on paper, much less on my laptop.

You have a great Idea with this story, It almost falls under the same ganere that i like to think about. If you ever need someone to headbutt ideas with look me up. maybe we can convince your muse to help out?

All right, short fist chapter, but it nailed everything that was required to pull me in. You threw me for a loop when the theory of humans being the alien species, I was expecting the Pokemon to be theorized as aliens. I Like where this could go and I am very intrigued. To be honest I don't see why you belittle your work, but maybe I'll see why later. I will say this, I want to read more, and I like the story. My only problem was the big scientific words...I have no idea what they are...but that is just me. It comes from not bothering to educate myself on biological terms. I am a kid in that respect...to lazy to look up proper names and scientific babbling to throw into my story for effect.

Expect more comments from me at some point...I will continue...but as I said to others such as yourself...I'm a bit self centered and want to focus on my own work. Overall, good first chappy, will continue onwards.

Psy here, somethings up with AFF, logged me out for some reason. Anyway, on with the review.

"These guys have faggy little tiaras..."
D'OH!


"I've waited for this since the day I met you. Please make love to me."
...I unno...That seems pushing it. It just seems odd to have something like "Hi, I'm Dominic", "Hi I'm Minerva (I want to fuck this guy)"


Where a connection between lover's hearts should have been, there was a foul link between twin black storms of pain and fear and powerful, all-consuming hate, with each one feeding the other.
...What. Emo Emo Emo Life is pain /wrists

Well, that was interesting. Rough sex was never my thing, but I loved the way you presented it before, during, and after.

Keep up the story.

Those damn Solon, always stealing the show. Interested in seeing how Mewtwo plays out with this.

Interesting...

Well, carry on. I want to see how he interacts with the new planet.

@Skyler: It tends to happen pretty often. No one can blame you for assuming so. This place gets dead in terms of updates for awhile, then everyone happens to update again at the same time, more or less.

It's hilariously absurd.

So far so good. However, this totally wreaks of 40k... and the smell is getting worse, Ausare.

"The drop ship New Moon"
I see what you did there.

I guess he landed in Lake Verity and scared Dawn out of her wits? Any particular reason they dropped into Sinnoh?

Sensory radial, I like that term.

And sorry for grabbing the top of the section list so fast. I hadn't checked the site all day and I just assumed no one added anything...as usual...