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October 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, a couple of spelling errors, but they're few and far between so easily ignored :)
I do hope you continue on with this story as it is interesting and I look forward to hearing storys from the other girls (Considering there are four girls, you have the potential for at least four chapters ^_^)
one suggestion for a (general) plot idea for a chapter would be Tsukasa telling a story that reveals that she's gotten further with a guy that Kagami, this would be particularly amusing since your initial banter implied Kagami has a steady partner in this story.
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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O .......>.>..........<.<..........>.>........ DAMN!!! now THAT was an intense one! im hoping you come back to this one ^-^ wondering what oh so innocent Miyuki has to offer
Keep at this one!!!
Keep at this one!!!
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh do tsukasa next hehe that was really good normally i dont read hetro but that was hot!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the above reviewer; we need moar.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I demand more lucky star hentai/yaoi/whatever because there isn't enough of it
a lot of futa but not enough hentai
so please more
a lot of futa but not enough hentai
so please more