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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good stuff. I like how you combined the actual game dialog with realistic responses. Keep up the writing.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
pretty good, can't wait to see where you're going with this story.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very, very promising. Well written and funny. I was overjoyed when I saw you post this, because I'm a huge fan of your original fic; The Beast (when'll you be updating that, btw)
Will this fic have smut? I really hope so.
Will this fic have smut? I really hope so.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not bad so far, kinda makes me want to start playing my games all over again just for the sake of reliving the storyline. Good job and can't wait to see more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it seems good so far... u know... i had many of the same thoughts when i 1st started ruby/sapphire/emerald. "mom" was waaaay 2 perky after moving 2 a 3 house town... it really doesnt qualify as a town does it? & Branden pissed me off 2... i was so happy when i got 2 kick his ass later on.