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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed your take on Kyo and Yuya! I've just finished all three and I do hope you'll write more. I've been wanting to do one for their reunion, but my muse is on long term sabbatical. This is a great fandom and I'm glad someone of your caliber is writing for it. Two tiny quibbles, one is that I've never heard of the clitoris being called a pulse point and I originally thought he was giving her a hickey on the major artery that's near there, also the phrase "womanhood" (and its male counterpart) should be used sparingly if at all. I think it's better to use few euphemisms as descriptors. Some are needed, at least in second reference, but Booter-Freak says it best- for a diff. fandom, but it applies: http:// booter-freak .deviantart. com/art/ AVATAR-COUNTDOWNAPALOOZA- Day-2-30413909 [minus the spaces]) Cured me of the habit!