rate_review Reviews

WOW!!!! Love it!!! Very nice!!!

OMG! super love it!!! ur fic gave me such a WAFF, i was jumping around like a crazed fangirl in the study room~~

really really good. cant wait for the next part!!

omg omg omg, that was amazing!!! i read the other chapters! so cute! i love the fact that the paining came true. ty for such an amazing story!

ADT

hmmm...what is he going to paint with her in the future but not in the painting itself??? Marriage?? but she'd be in the painting...children?? a blend of her and him??? I wonder??? can't wait to read the next chapter to find her expression on his gallery and what he's going to paint.

Awesome story! :D Love all the details. Kyoya x Haruhi is my new favourite pairing from the series (thanks to ep. 8 of the anime), and this story really brings life to that pairing. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Very well written; I'm impressed with the fact that the details flowed so seamlessly together. There was realistic character interaction, emotions, and other events besides the sex, which is not something that can be found easily on this site. It's obvious that you worked hard on it. I respect you for that. Well done.

^_^ very nice! The only thing I have to say is...steamy. I enjoyed this chapter it was well thought out. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please post soon so I don't have to wait too long. :P

Yay, I'm glad you posted more! This chapter I think was better than the first because it looked like you payed more attention to wording and what not. The only thing that confused me like crazy was you used the term "epee" which, and I looked it up, is french for rapier. But with out looking it up I didn't know what it meant. :( I like this chapter tho because it was more dramatic in a way. I enjoyed the fairytale section a lot. I'm glad you found a less known tale for the twins. The only one I could come up with was the two from Alice in Wonderland. :P

Overall; I really like this story. I think it has a good idea behind it and once you get over the fact that they are slightly out of character its a fun read. Please keep posting more!

I loved it. Please tell me there will be more.