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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I agree with you the characters are kind of off personality wise but I can see where you're going with this. I suggest you go over it once because I saw some mistakes in the grammar and there where a couple of spots where you missed some words. I just think it needs to be revised a little bit.
I am very curious to see what happens with the club now. Will the others find out? And what happens with the club? Will they date in secret??? Please update it soon because I would like to find out what you'll do with this.
I am very curious to see what happens with the club now. Will the others find out? And what happens with the club? Will they date in secret??? Please update it soon because I would like to find out what you'll do with this.